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for$aken · need feedback

yo guys tell me what u thing

the good the bad the left over crack..na just the good and the bad the last part is from a song

Bravo

I am loving the overall style of it, I think keeping it in a monotone style was the perfect decision.

To improve it I would have probably had the guy a little to the left to keep in line with the rule of thirds, but that is just nitpicking, its great as it is mate

for$aken

thanks man and that was also the only thing i did not like...i will probly move him more over into the center but just a little.

i am pround of where i put my name though ti blends in pretty good....